Thursday, June 5, 2014

Snippets and Stories: (Amelioration) - A Patch of Forest

A Patch of Forest


Just an excerpt of a piece starring Sil (or at least his original character design), that I liked but couldn't associate with.

Original Char. Design/Background: When I first created him, Sil was a very average character, dull and with no outstanding skills, hobbies, or traits (edit: in afterthought, I guess he hasn't changed much). He was a white collared IT worker in his early 40s and starting to put on weight due to the long hours of being cooped up in his cubicle. Personality mostly the same i.e. easily flustered, hesitant, somewhat awkward, loves food. Silvanus was raised in the rural parts, but his family moved to a metropolitan city when he was 4, so he remembers nothing of it. Having lived nearly his entire life among skyscrapers and bustling traffic of both automobiles and people, he knows nothing of the greenery. (Buuuut then I realized I couldn't quite capture the perspective of an older and mature adult, so I shoved him into a time machine plus some other tweaking, and now he's reliving college again)



Synopsis: One day while walking to work, he notices a rather out of place patch of greenery in the middle of the city, and after a moment's hesitation, opts to take the more scenic route.


Elsewhere, Silvanus pulled off his sunglasses, the dark lens glinting in the morning sun. It had been no more than 3 hours since the light of dawn, yet the sparkle of morning dew had already burned off, and the comforting blanket of fog would soon follow. He sighed and wiped at the lens, squinting through the harsh morning rays. It hurt his eyes just to look at the ground, even on the sinuous paved trail snaking through the verdant abundance of lightly trimmed greenery and trees.

It was at least a pleasant scenic walk along a shaded path, and the seeping streaks of light that filtered through the leaves were a sight to behold. Spring would soon come, and the small harbingers that flitted in the trees made sure of it as they chirped the news for all to hear. As if that weren’t enough, the bushes were burgeoning with a tender green of new shoots while the flowers of early spring had already grown promising young buds that but hinted at their coloration.

The IT worker settled down under the shade of a nearby birch and felt the zephyr tug at his tresses. A dark curtain fell over his eyes and for a moment he reveled in the serenity of the cool morning breeze and scents, the distinct smell of damp earth and the sparse leaf litter that had fallen. In his mind's eye he envisioned the tender shoots ever reaching for the sky, a leaf that had too soon cut from the mother tree fluttering in the breeze. A soft chirping reached his ears as did the droning buzz of insects, and briefly he saw a mated pair of titmouse, darting out and about the treetops as they caught sustenance, but ever watchful of their newly constructed nest and ever frail but just as precious contents it housed within.

Monday, June 2, 2014

Synopsis: Esprit de la Plume


Esprit de la Plume is a story that I've been spinning up in the past 4 years after the light played a visual trick and startled me into thinking something on my paper had moved. Been vacillating between continuing or dropping this story. Sometimes one has to wonder whether the only one interested is they themselves. That goes for all my stories.

Summary: Meek little Lucy (Lillian) comes from a Family of Artisans. As such, her often busy Parents leave her much Time to herself, and so she begins drawing to pass the Time. When her drawing moves and talks back, she thinks nothing of it, if anything, is more than pleased with the addition of a friend. Upon entering her academic years, she is eager to talk with others and share her already made friend. But others, even her one and only closest friend, lack of belief in her animated drawings lead her to become a meek and reserved child in search of praise and acknowledgement. When finally, a street urchin, Husher, sees and believes, she can hardly let go of the chance to prove herself to another. But Husher will have none of it and wants nothing to do with what he believes to be witchcraft. Between the choices, Lucy pursues a believer, but as Life would have it, nothing is ever that easy. Husher’s distrust as well as the townspeople’s disbelief would ensure it.

A/N: I'll post up pictures of the two later, along with their character profile. I haven't drawn them since 2012 and I cringe to see my art from before.